Monday, April 9, 2012

Dear Blog Reader,

I write this to you to talk about RE2. This paper felt better to write than RE1 but the only thing I felt I fell short on was the overall word count. All my ideas made it to the paper but if I had more time I could have made the word count. The writing process that I feel that I achieved would be Rhetorical Knowledge. I choose Rhetorical Knowledge because I had to write in a different type of genre, blogging. It's a new style because the writer has to change their voice and format but still try to have the same ideas. Parts of my paper had to be change from a normal essay format to a blog post, like "The li ion batteries aim to fix that problem and many more that are found with the standard lithium ion battery. For more research about the li ion battery go to http://www.popsci.com/science/article/2011-11/new-li-ion-battery-design-boosts-energy-capacity-and-charge-rate-10-fold". things I learned from this paper that i could take to other classes would be using different formats to have a different or bigger audience. My favorite part from my paper would be the last sentence, which states "This is the future for electric cars and their batteries. If this does not work then the hope for a positive future with cars will be thrown into the dark ages". I like it because it's a warning to fix the problem that is raising or there will be no future for cars. I hope I get a positive grade on this paper because I felt I worked hard on it.

Your Favorite Blogger,
Jesse

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